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*types in Lust* *stares at three lines* *cringes*
Oookay, note to self, this is prison, not second grade. "I'd like to be your friend"? No, no, and no!
(Edit: Oh, god, this whole bit is the most awkward dialogue I've ever written. My poor betas!)
(Edit 2: That, on the other hand, was a good bit. And that phrase back there was good, too. Dammit, why can't it all suck so I wouldn't need/want to go through it with a fine comb to save the good bits? Argh!)
(Edit 3: Back is screaming bloody murder, but if I can just finish Sloth and Pride now, I can print them off to proofread and edit on the way home. Just half an hour is all I neeeeeed!)
