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[bubosquared]

I'm writing a grungeboys story, and it occured to me it's rather geared towards a fan public. It's really stream-of-conciousness, and it just doesn't feel like anything I've ever read in published fiction. Here, this is what I mean:

She likes to watch them. They're always touchy-feely, but it gets worse on the road. She can't even remember the number of times she walked into the room they all shared to see them lying there like a two-piece puzzle.

She felt strange in the beginning, joining them, being in the same room, let alone the same bed. But they can't afford seperate rooms, much less seperate beds, and they made room for her, let her lie in the middle, where she could feel strangely like a third piece of the puzzle, even though she knew she wasn't.

Nick noticed her discomfort, because Nick always notices things. Because Nick watches people. He watches and notices and then one day comes up to her and asks "Jess? Something wrong?" and even though it could've just been an innocent question, but she knows he suspects, and she knows he knows that she knows.

It feels so ... fandom-y. This is why I label this 'original slash' rather than a short story or something. Whatever. I have no idea what I'm talking about. I'm gonna go back to Jesse and her touchy loveboys.

(Is Jesse a Mary Sue? I suspect so. Should I be worried about this?)