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[bubosquared]

May or may not have written 600 words in one hour. Um. There was drugs-smoking, and kisses in the rain. And it's done. Here And Now is done. Will type it up tonight (after I'm back from dinner at my collegue's) and then it's ready for beta.

Volunteers?

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[sivan.livejournal.com]

Well, I can't offer language beta, for obvious reasons, but if you want to know if there's anything unclear or things like that, sure.

[bubosquared.livejournal.com]

I'd love that. Ta! (And. Um. Considering that your English is better than a lot of native speakers' I've seen ... Yeah.)

Oh, and.

[bubosquared.livejournal.com]

What I'll mostly need is someone to tell me wether it's all a big cliché or not. Because there's bits that feel v. cliché.

[breathlessgin.livejournal.com]

could always send to me. I'm all for reading.

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[bubosquared.livejournal.com]

That would be cool. I need someone to fine-tooth-comb the grammar and style for me, basically.

Email on the way!

[orangekoi.livejournal.com]

If fine-tooth-combing is what you need, I'd be happy to look at it. I do a lot of beta reading, anyway.

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[bubosquared.livejournal.com]

Whoops. Didn't see this until I'd already posted. Sorry!

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[orangekoi.livejournal.com]

^~ 'Sokay. I read it. Very nice.

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[bubosquared.livejournal.com]

Thanks. :)