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Sofie 'Melle' Werkers ([personal profile] bubosquared) wrote2001-05-28 01:07 pm

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I shouldn't re-read my own stories. This used to be the one story I was really really proud of and now I can't stop noticing all the misspellings, the punctuation and grammar errors, the horrible cliche's ...
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[personal profile] rsadelle 2001-05-28 01:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I just went to look at the story, and I cringed even just skimming it. I murdered the characterization. I Mary Sued everyone in it. It's overly sentimental. I gave Krycek a family to show that he's really a good guy. *sigh* This is why I don't need crit on my older stories; I can do it myself.

[identity profile] bubosquared.livejournal.com 2001-05-28 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Why do you think none of the stories actually html'ed at my site are older than 2 years, except Chris [which was beta'ed]? I couldn't bear to see them every time I revamped the site.