Tada!

[bubosquared]

In which the boys do math, have sex, and consume lots of coffee, not necessarily in that order. (*NSync) - kodachrome

Aka, Ze College AU, first story. :)

Comments

[wea.livejournal.com]

Eee! I like! I like! Your sex scene seemed a teeny bit... um... stilted? (Mind you, you didn't ask for feedback...sorry if you didn't want it...) But, other than that - I like! :)

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[bubosquared.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thank you! It's always cool when people not normally in the fandom like a story. ^___^ Makes me feel like a pusher or something. Muahahaha!

However:

Mind you, you didn't ask for feedback...sorry if you didn't want it...

Ahem. *points to header*

feedback: if you like this story, please let me know. if you don't, please let me know why not.

Feedback is always welcome. :) And stilted how? Too out-of-the-blue? Too rushed?

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[wea.livejournal.com]

That'll teach me to read headers :)

Umm... stilted just as in... choppy, maybe? Moreso in the way it was written/acted out than in how it was placed into the story...